Six Sentence Sunday has come to pass and I actually struggled in whether I wanted to pick another snippet frenzy. I really do have trouble finding just a little bit to go on to pimp my wares as it were. So, since I follow them on Facebook, I’m going to give this one a whorl.
Today I bring to you a seven sentence snippet of The Romance Novel Book Club. Enjoy!
That powerful organ between his legs slipped in my opening, and my hips rocked in a greedy gyration. I swear he held back his full length from impaling me completely. At least, from what I could remember. One more thrust from him had me not caring. In the soft glow of the room I saw the little horns on the top of his mask. He was a devil of a man. My carnal sin.
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Hmm first person seems to make that scene more powerful!
Very nice. I especially like the end of this scene.
I certainly agree the first person pov draws you into the scene.
The last two sentences are fantastic! Great snippet Kastil!
Great descriptions here. Really felt “in” the moment. Great snippet, my dear!
Thank you, everyone. I’d say out of all the things I’ve written, this story is still my favorite.
What a fantastic snippet!
Oh yes – first person is so intriguing!