Welcome to another SSS snippet. Today I bring you something very old from my collection of unfinished manuscripts. This is a fantasy piece based on my own world of Arakani. With Fath’s Path I intended to write about about two characters eventually meeting. It became epic in size and very unwieldy. An endeavor no upstart writer should ever try. I did send it to a publisher and get a nice form rejection, though. I plan on turning the heat on this and have a trilogy semi-mapped out. Well, as mapped out as a pantser like me would. Enjoy!
“Come to finish the job, have we?” [Sebolt] bore all his weight down on her, pinching her body between his thighs. He leaned in then, planted a firm kiss on her lips and she struggled to break free, her eyes going wide. Slowly her body became docile and she released the dagger, returning his affection.
He rose up, smiling down at her.“I’ve missed you, my song bird.”
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Very nice. I felt like I just had a nibble of cheesecake. All I can say is, now I need more. NOW!
Sweet! Get busy on this one.
I see you only have 9 more days til ROTG. You need a spotlight from me or anything? Let me know.
will do
LOL…just noticed I replied to your comment. LOL Yeah…you too, Missy!!
I would love to do a spotlight. I’ve got something lined up for the 10th here but anything you got after that would be peachy.
And this got a rejection? Were they snoozing? Not bad for 6. You should try to polish it up.
Well it was one of the bigger companies back in the day when you sent them in via snail mail. In hindsight, I’m glad I’m not with them.
This is great!